19 February 2019

"Black Man" Wins Award for Most Unnecessary Adjective


            No, there wasn’t really an award, this is just an opinion piece. And honestly “black man” can be extended to almost any ethnic, gender, religious, or miscellaneous minority. The point is people tend toward using unnecessary adjectives that do not contribute anything more than subliminally altering the way a story will be received. For instance, the media always seems to feel the need to specify the ethnicity of victims and perpetrators of homicide. As if “man gets shot in the park” just isn’t news worthy unless it was racially motivated. But negative portrayals are not the only problem. Positive and even neutral stories often use the same unnecessary descriptors.
            Have you ever started a story with “this black guy” or “this old guy” or “this Muslim guy”? Would the story have been any different if you had said “this person”? Maybe it would have. Maybe we needed that context to understand the story, but if not, then why did you include it. What does it say about you that your view of society that you automatically separate this category of person out from the rest. Maybe you wouldn’t have specified “this white guy” or “this skinny guy” because those are “normal” descriptors in your mind.
            Personally, I believe positive examples are the worst offenders, because these are too often used with misaligned intentions. You think you are doing good by paying praise to a minority, but unless their minority status contributes to the story, all you are doing is qualifying their accomplishment as different. Let’s say you came across a headline that read: 84-year old woman wins marathon. It sounds like you are celebrating their accomplishment, but you are only including their age because it makes them an anomaly. Women that age are not supposed to win marathons. This woman is different. Now compare: black man named surgeon of the year. It sounds like it is promoting black people as hard working, but really it comes off as a qualifier again. The reason you are specifying it was a black man was because black men aren’t supposed to be accomplished doctors. This man was different. He was “one of the good ones.”
Perhaps I am the only one seeing it this way, but I really believe we should pull back on specifically calling out minority accomplishments. We should keep embracing the accomplishments, but we should normalize them. Just report on all of the great things minorities are doing the same way you would if a fit 22-year old won a marathon, and if someone opens the story only to be surprised by the face looking back at them… well then maybe that person will reevaluate the way they see the world.

-AMS